關係子句通常都能簡化為更精簡的單位。因此,在英文寫作中,可以考慮刪除一些不必要的字,讓關係子句縮短,把句子變得更簡潔。以下將介紹簡化關係子句的幾種方法:
方法一:將關係子句改為形容詞片語
Jane, who was late again today, sat next to me during lunch.
簡化後:Jane, late again today, sat next to me during lunch.
The wife, who was angry with her husband, did not return home last night.
簡化後:The wife, angry with her husband, did not return home last night.
以上兩個例句中,關係子句內的關係代名詞 + “be” 動詞(who was)一起省略掉後就能簡化成形容詞片語。省略後的形容詞片語功能上與原句的關係子句一樣修飾前面的名詞。
方法二:將關係子句改為分詞片語
The dog which is sitting at the door is waiting for its owner.
簡化後:The dog sitting at the door is waiting for its owner.
同樣地,原句中的關係代名詞 + “be” 動詞(which is)可以省略,把關係子句簡化成分詞片語。
而以下兩個例句則使用另一種簡化方式。
The man who lives next door teaches in a public school.
簡化後:The man living next door teaches in a public school.
句中的 “who” 與 “lives” 是主動關係,把關係代名詞 “who” 拿掉之後,動詞 “lives” 改為表示主動的現在分詞 “living”,“living next door” 則為簡化過後的分詞片語,修飾前面的名詞 “the man”。
Students who hand in the report late will lose five marks.
簡化後:Students handing in the report late will lose five marks.
句中的 “who” 與 “hand in” 這個動作是主動關係,把關係代名詞 “who”刪除後,動詞 “hand” 改為現在分詞 “handing”,簡化成分詞片語,修飾名詞 “students”。
We all read the e-mail that was sent by the manager earlier today.
簡化後:We all read the e-mail sent by the manager earlier today.
Discrimination that is based on race, gender, age, or disability is not allowed.
簡化後:Discrimination based on race, gender, age, or disability is not allowed.
以上兩個例句中的關係字句使用被動語態,直接將關係代名詞 + “be” 動詞(that was / that is)省略後就形成過去分詞的分詞片語。
方法三:將關係子句改為介系詞片語
The woman who is in the meeting room is our new team member.
簡化後:The woman in the meeting room is our new team member.
此句同樣出現關係代名詞 + “be” 動詞(who is),省略後剩下 “in the meeting room” 的部分就是介系詞片語。
The two-story house that had a beautiful front yard was sold $300,000.
簡化後:The two-story house with a beautiful front yard was sold $300,000.
關係子句中即使沒有關係代名詞 + “be” 動詞的部分還是能夠簡化為介系詞片語。以上句為例,原來關係子句中的動詞 “had” 可以使用介系詞 “with” 替換,將關係代名詞刪除後就能形成介系詞片語。
另外,一個關係子句不一定只有一種簡化方式,以下兩個例句除了能用分詞片語寫也能用介系詞片語寫。
The student who is wearing a blue jacket is a member of the science club.
簡化後:The student wearing a blue jacket is a member of the science club.The student in a blue jacket is a member of the science club.
The lady who is standing on the stage is the newly elected mayor.
簡化後:The lady standing on the stage is the newly elected mayor.The lady on the stage in the newly elected mayor.